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Reggie19
Reggie19
20. RE: 'The Flight of the Secretary'
Mar 24 2009, 6:28 AM EDT | Post edited: Mar 24 2009, 6:28 AM EDT
"Cromwell's mind was racing. What was this? Wyatt, his true friend through everything....and, his sweet wife, Elizabeth? This was mad. They would kill Wyatt for this. He could not let it happen.

He thought back to his time as Wolsey's 'man'. He'd loved his mentor, and to see his fall was heart breaking...and yet, he seized the moment to further his cause...thinking, as he always did, that the sacrifice of one man was worth it if he could advance The Reformation. But, Wolsey had been like a father to him...and now ...Wyatt, like a brother to him...was giving his life for...what? HIM??
He could not believe it. Nor, could he allow it.

"Elizabeth", he whispered. "This can not be...this can not happn".

"No...my love", she said, as she tenderly touched his face. "It must happen.. It is Thomas' wiah."

"But...why?" asked a perplexed and guilt ridden Cromwell. "I killed the only woman he ever loved"

"Oh, but no,,,my Lord...that was the King, was it not?"

"Elizabeth, i pray you...stop!" beseeched Cromwell.

"Nay,,,we must not stop", begged the exasperated Elizabeth. "this was all his idea...I could not persuade him like wise. Perhaps he wishes to join his beloved Queen Anne...or perhaps he loved you more than you think he should. But, it is his decision...and we must not tary. There is much to be done, and it can not be done if you be dead, my husband".

"You love me too much,", said a defeated Cromwell. "He doth love me too much. I pray that the Almighty doth forgive me for taking this opportuity at the price of my one true friend's life".

Cromwell followed his dutiful and loving wife to a waiting barge. But, he hated himself for it. What of Wyatt? What of his young son Gregory? "
OMG, that was absolutely fantastic!
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Reggie19
Reggie19
21. RE: 'The Flight of the Secretary'
Mar 24 2009, 6:39 AM EDT | Post edited: Mar 24 2009, 6:39 AM EDT
Right, here's my attempt with my half asleep mind!

Cromwell and Elizabeth continued down the ghostly quiet corridor, the fire flickering from the torches seemed to be the only sound that stifled the deathly silence... but wait, footsteps... were they going to be discovered. Cromwell lowered his head instantly, Elizabeth continued to walk on, holding his arm tighter, then a man, draped in a black cloak appeared...
"Ah Mrs Cromwell, Mr Wyatt, how haps Mr Cromwell, i hope he is of sounder mind now that he was a few short hours ago" it wasn't a Yeoman guard, Cromwell had heard that voice somewhere before as well, it was the keeper of the tower, Master Kingston.
"He is attempting to sleep, whether or not he'll be succesful is another issue" commented Elizabeth, a sardonic tone in her voice, Cromwell turned his head slightly, wondered how she could act like there was nothing going on.
"Ah, well, it is for the best, tomorrow will be a hard day i'm afraid" commented Kingston, Cromwell couldn't help but wonder, how had he spoken to Anne before her death, how had he spoken of it to the other Yeoman?
"Well, we best be off, Gregory is waiting outside, he's desperate for news on his father" explained Elizabeth hurriedly.
"Yes, perhaps i shall check on Mr Cromwell - " began Kingston.
"NO" Elizabeth panicked, Master Kingston eyed her suspiciously.
"I do not want my husband disturbed, tomorrow will be a difficult day for him, the least he deserves is some sleep, if he manages it, it'll prevent him from thinking for some time" Elizabeth explained, almost tearfully, and Kingston smiled, a sympathetic smile.
"As his wife, i have no choice but to respect your wishes, i shall leave you now" Kingston smiled, bowing his head slightly to Elizabeth and Thomas, before continuing down the passageway.
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Reggie19
Reggie19
22. RE: 'The Flight of the Secretary'
Mar 24 2009, 6:45 AM EDT | Post edited: Mar 24 2009, 6:45 AM EDT
"Oh, Mr Wyatt" Kingston suddenly called out just as Elizabeth and Thomas were preparing to leave the chilling corridor.
"I came by something some four years ago, during the time of the Lady Anne's captivity" continued Kingston as Elizabeth and Thomas kept their backs turned.
"It's a letter, it appears to have been written to you" and Elizabeth turned slowly on her heels, smiling through gritted teeth.
"I shall take it, Mr Wyatt is quite incomposed at this time, as you know, he and my husbands were close friends, his sentence causes him as much grief as it does me" continued Elizabeth walking back toward Kingston, and taking the letter from him, trying to keep her senses. Thomas remained standing exactly where he was behind her, frozen in position, head bowed to the extent that it was starting to cause him pain.
"My deepest sympathies Lady Elizabeth, and Master Wyatt" Kingston nodded his head and continued down the corridor, Elizabeth didn't walk this time, she practically strode down the remainder of the passageway, pulling her husband along beside her, they had to get to the barge before anyone else's suspicions were arisen!
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TillyT2
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23. RE: 'The Flight of the Secretary'
Mar 24 2009, 10:17 AM EDT | Post edited: Mar 24 2009, 10:17 AM EDT
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Hever
Hever
24. RE: 'The Flight of the Secretary'
Mar 24 2009, 11:11 AM EDT | Post edited: Mar 24 2009, 11:11 AM EDT
""Oh, Mr Wyatt" Kingston suddenly called out just as Elizabeth and Thomas were preparing to leave the chilling corridor.
"I came by something some four years ago, during the time of the Lady Anne's captivity" continued Kingston as Elizabeth and Thomas kept their backs turned.
"It's a letter, it appears to have been written to you" and Elizabeth turned slowly on her heels, smiling through gritted teeth.
"I shall take it, Mr Wyatt is quite incomposed at this time, as you know, he and my husbands were close friends, his sentence causes him as much grief as it does me" continued Elizabeth walking back toward Kingston, and taking the letter from him, trying to keep her senses. Thomas remained standing exactly where he was behind her, frozen in position, head bowed to the extent that it was starting to cause him pain.
"My deepest sympathies Lady Elizabeth, and Master Wyatt" Kingston nodded his head and continued down the corridor, Elizabeth didn't walk this time, she practically strode down the remainder of the passageway, pulling her husband along beside her, they had to get to the barge before anyone else's suspicions were arisen!"
Brilliant Reg!
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scooter&buster
scooter&buster
25. RE: 'The Flight of the Secretary'
Mar 24 2009, 11:39 AM EDT | Post edited: Mar 24 2009, 11:45 AM EDT
(since Gregory has not been yet shown in the series, and only referenced...we don't know how old he is in the series. The way things look so far, it is my guess that when they do show Gregory at the execution, he will most likely be a teenager, as opposed to the grown and married man he really was at that time. So, I'm going with a 15 year old Gregory)
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Elizabeth desperately led her dazed husband forward. "He must snap out of this", she thought...."or we're doomed"

"Thomas..Thomas"...she hissed. "this is not the time for sentiment and regret...hurry along...NOW".

She stared into his unblinking eyes. He was some where else...She grabbed his chin and forced him to see her. He blinked.....she and the world around him slowly came back into focus.

"um yes..." He was barely able to speak...as he followed her.

Some how they made it past the guards and onto the awaiting barge.

Cromwell sat silently never looking back at the Tower as it slowly disappeared from view. He just sat there, slightly trembling as he gazed down at the letter. He could just make out the late Queens handwriting in the moonlight. The ink was smudged with....what? "Tears", he thought out loud. "So many tears". And before he could help himself, the once all powerful Master Cromwell--Chancellor, Lord Privy Seal-- was crying uncontrolably..

"Ah...Jesu! What have I done? Oh..Jesus...JESUS!"

Gregory, rushed to his father...not used to seeing such a raw display of emotion from him. "It alright now, Father. We're going to be safe....we're going to go far away from here"...

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Not much this morning....brain's still sleepy :)
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HeroineAddict
HeroineAddict
26. RE: 'The Flight of the Secretary'
Mar 24 2009, 1:12 PM EDT | Post edited: Mar 24 2009, 1:12 PM EDT
"(since Gregory has not been yet shown in the series, and only referenced...we don't know how old he is in the series. The way things look so far, it is my guess that when they do show Gregory at the execution, he will most likely be a teenager, as opposed to the grown and married man he really was at that time. So, I'm going with a 15 year old Gregory)
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Elizabeth desperately led her dazed husband forward. "He must snap out of this", she thought...."or we're doomed"

"Thomas..Thomas"...she hissed. "this is not the time for sentiment and regret...hurry along...NOW".

She stared into his unblinking eyes. He was some where else...She grabbed his chin and forced him to see her. He blinked.....she and the world around him slowly came back into focus.

"um yes..." He was barely able to speak...as he followed her.

Some how they made it past the guards and onto the awaiting barge.

Cromwell sat silently never looking back at the Tower as it slowly disappeared from view. He just sat there, slightly trembling as he gazed down at the letter. He could just make out the late Queens handwriting in the moonlight. The ink was smudged with....what? "Tears", he thought out loud. "So many tears". And before he could help himself, the once all powerful Master Cromwell--Chancellor, Lord Privy Seal-- was crying uncontrolably..

"Ah...Jesu! What have I done? Oh..Jesus...JESUS!"

Gregory, rushed to his father...not used to seeing such a raw display of emotion from him. "It alright now, Father. We're going to be safe....we're going to go far away from here"...

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Not much this morning....brain's still sleepy :)"
Eeep! <3 Scooter and Reggie....SO amazing. I love how this story's developing :D *racks her brain for the next part*
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HeroineAddict
HeroineAddict
27. RE: 'The Flight of the Secretary'
Mar 24 2009, 1:47 PM EDT | Post edited: Mar 24 2009, 1:52 PM EDT
Fantastic work so far, guys!

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Trying to keep herself steady with the soft rocking of the barge, Elizabeth knelt before her husband and attempted, very gently, to prise the letter from his cold hands. He resisted, numbly, almost unconsciously, as though he was clutching at something precious to his own heart, a missive of salvation…of forgiveness… The sharply-stroked A of the late Queen’s signature gleamed like a star in the darkness.

“I don‘t…” Cromwell almost gasped the words, and Elizabeth looked up into his eyes, the reflection of the moonlight on the water casting a refracting spectrum across his face, tears glittering like frost. She put her hand on Gregory’s arm where he too knelt beside his father, uncertainly, not knowing whether she meant to push the boy away or pull him close.

“Your nerves are in a disarray.” She was surprised by how steady own voice was, how matter-of-fact. She wondered if she could reach him through the pain, or if the time he had spent in solitude, re-living every mistake and every cruelty, every death, had dimmed the light in his eyes forever. He made a soft hiccupping noise, a stifled sob.

“Thomas,” she said firmly. His lips trembled, but his eyes found hers, his gaze agonised but true.

“Give me the letter,” she urged. Again, that resistance, and the paper creased between their hands.

“Father,” Gregory whispered. Cromwell blinked like a sleepwalker shaken from a dream, turning his head at the sound of his son’s voice, and in that moment Elizabeth pulled the letter from his grip.

Her heart racing, she angled the page towards the clear moon…tearstains…and a shaking hand. The last words of Queen Anne.

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Sorry for the melodrama :p
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Reggie19
Reggie19
28. RE: 'The Flight of the Secretary'
Mar 24 2009, 2:08 PM EDT | Post edited: Mar 24 2009, 2:08 PM EDT
I'll take it from here, but i have another idea for a bit later when the story progresses more (seriously, sociology is so boring, and it's an hour long, which is dedicated to my imagination going a bit nuts now!)! And you're not being melodramatic HeroineAddict, i like the way the stories going so far! And again to Scooter Buster, brill entry!

"We don't need to read this" stated Elizabeth, she couldn't believe how her husband stared into the darkness, he looked so hollow and empty.
"Thomas, this was not your doing, none of this, Anne, Thomas... none of it was your fault, Thomas wanted to do this, he told me... he couldn't let Henry get away with something like this again - " began Elizabeth.
"It wasn't the King's fault, it was... it was all my doing, all of it, the accusations, the trial, the outcome, i caused it all, i didn't think then what it could do to me, but now... now... at least in dying i wouldn't have to live with what i did, instead i have survived, and for what, to live with the Boleyns on my conscience, and now Thomas, i ensured he wasn't to take the fall for what happened to Anne" explained Thomas, trying to steady his voice.
"Thomas, what are you trying to say?" asked Elizabeth.
"It was my fault, i got rid of Anne, i orchestrated the whole thing, her adultery, her lovers, the charge of incest, i fabricated it all - " began Thomas.
"Thomas - "Elizabeth interjected.
"Don't... don't make excuses for me Elizabeth, i was the reason it all happened, why Anne was accused, why Smeaton, Brereton, Weston, Norris and Rochford all suffered for it... Thomas didn't because i wouldn't allow it, he is a good friend, and his father is a good man... and now... he is to die because of what i did" Cromwell muttered.
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Reggie19
Reggie19
29. RE: 'The Flight of the Secretary'
Mar 24 2009, 2:11 PM EDT | Post edited: Mar 24 2009, 2:11 PM EDT
Ran out of words.

Cromwell only realized now the extent of what he had done, and he couldn't believe it, they say that power corrupts, absolute powers corrupts absolutely, and they were right.
"Father, the King made you do those horrible things, you're not to blame, and let's accept some truth here, the Lady Anne was hardly a saint, if she deserved to be executed, surely she did something to warrant it" but Cromwell wasn't listening, he turned to Elizabeth, his eyes boring into her face.
"Read the letter, i deserve no better than to hear her words, words of a woman i murdered!" ordered Cromwell.
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HeroineAddict
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30. RE: 'The Flight of the Secretary'
Mar 24 2009, 2:18 PM EDT | Post edited: Mar 24 2009, 2:18 PM EDT
Love it, Reg :))) Do you find this valuable?    
Reggie19
Reggie19
31. RE: 'The Flight of the Secretary'
Mar 24 2009, 2:57 PM EDT | Post edited: Mar 24 2009, 2:57 PM EDT
Right, now for the letter.

May 18th 1536

My dear Thomas,

If you are reading this letter, then it means that i am dead, and gone. I want you to know that i am sorry for the ill-treatment i directed at you, you had done nothing to receive such words or actions from me, you were and always will be my true friend, and i am grateful that you stayed by my side, even after everything that had happened, and hope that you will remain at my side through what will happen.

I'm not sure how it came to this, although i will admit that there were times when i said things that i wish i hadn't said, or did things that i wish i'd never committed, i look back now and think... regret would probably be a more appropriate word. I know that i have no right to ask this of you, and you do not have to feel as though you must carry this out, as i know that it will do me no benefit now, but i want it done for Elizabeth's sake, as i will not be there to see her become a beautiful young woman, and to tell her what truly happened.

I am not guilty of the charges against me, i do hope you will believe that, however, i do have my suspicions of who was to blame. The King, my husband, has never gone to such an extent on his own, Wolsey was not taken down by Henry alone... i'm ashamed to admit that my family and i also played a part in that... ironically i believe now the same has be done to me. Beware of Secretary Cromwell, i'm afraid he has reached too far, and can no longer see that he has limits just as i have now realized. I say this because we argued shortly before these charges came to light, and think it too coincidental that we should come into conflict and suddenly these accusations were revealed. I need my daughter to know the truth, i don't want her to hate me, i am afraid that Henry will do that enough to make sure she will anyway, without knowing of my conviction.
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Reggie19
Reggie19
32. RE: 'The Flight of the Secretary'
Mar 24 2009, 3:03 PM EDT | Post edited: Mar 24 2009, 3:03 PM EDT
Ran out of words again...

Be careful Thomas, the court has eyes everywhere, you are watched every moment of everyday, judged, spoken of... this place is corrupt, it takes the innocent and turns them into villains... i do hope it will not do this to you. There will be people who will jeer me to your face, do not defend me if you believe me innocent, i don't want you to die defending me, i ensured you were never permitted near my chambers for a reason, i told you never to speak of me, never to speak to me again if you valued your life for a reason... i loved you Thomas, and didn't want what has happened to so many others in the past to happen to you.

I will reiterate and plead with you not to trust Secretary Cromwell, i know he has played some part in my downfall, i may not know what yet, but do hope you will endeavour to discover it, if not for me, than for Elizabeth.

Yours until the day i die, and beyond.

Anne Boleyn
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Maggie-AnneB.
Maggie-AnneB.
33. RE: 'The Flight of the Secretary'
Mar 24 2009, 9:00 PM EDT | Post edited: Mar 24 2009, 9:00 PM EDT
A little late, but the addition of Wyatt is perfect because he was in the tower and Kathryn Howard beg for him to be released, which he was. Do you find this valuable?    
Maggie-AnneB.
Maggie-AnneB.
34. RE: 'The Flight of the Secretary'
Mar 24 2009, 9:22 PM EDT | Post edited: Mar 24 2009, 9:22 PM EDT
I am mad! I just wrote a pretty damn decent part of the story and I deleted it. Damn! I can't even get into the mood now... so if someone else can write, then I can continue from there.... Ahhh I am so sad..... =`( Do you find this valuable?    
Hever
Hever
35. RE: 'The Flight of the Secretary'
Mar 24 2009, 9:28 PM EDT | Post edited: Mar 24 2009, 9:28 PM EDT
"I am mad! I just wrote a pretty damn decent part of the story and I deleted it. Damn! I can't even get into the mood now... so if someone else can write, then I can continue from there.... Ahhh I am so sad..... =`("
No, don't give up!!!
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HeroineAddict
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36. RE: 'The Flight of the Secretary'
Mar 24 2009, 9:30 PM EDT | Post edited: Mar 24 2009, 9:31 PM EDT
"I am mad! I just wrote a pretty damn decent part of the story and I deleted it. Damn! I can't even get into the mood now... so if someone else can write, then I can continue from there.... Ahhh I am so sad..... =`("
Argh, it is *so* annoying when that happens...you will not believe how many times I've done that in the past, particularly since my computer has a habit of highlighting text without me asking it to!

I'd write something, but I really have to go to bed...it's half one in the morning here. Tomorrow, though... Cheer up, Maggie :))
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Maggie-AnneB.
Maggie-AnneB.
37. RE: 'The Flight of the Secretary'
Mar 24 2009, 10:47 PM EDT | Post edited: Mar 24 2009, 10:47 PM EDT
Ok... I will attempt to remember what I had wrote... It probably won't be as good as the original (everything in life seems to be like that) but I just have to do it... Math has gotten me mad, so this will calm me down... Hopefully... Do you find this valuable?    
Maggie-AnneB.
Maggie-AnneB.
38. RE: 'The Flight of the Secretary'
Mar 24 2009, 11:04 PM EDT | Post edited: Mar 24 2009, 11:11 PM EDT
Elizabeth finished reading and she folded up the letter. She looked up at her husband, as if to see what they were to do now. Thomas though, wasn't looking at her, he was looking out across the river, at the tower.

"Thomas, what are you thinking?" asked Elizabeth. She waited for an answer from her husband. No response.

Taking a deep breath and crushing the letter in her hands, Elizabeth said, "Thomas, Anne wasn't your fault. Her downfall was caused be her own self."

Still no answer from Thomas, although the tears were long gone, that still desolate look was still etched into his features.

Now Elizabeth was getting impatient. Dawn was coming, and they had no time to lose, for if they did not leave, they would be found. All of them would be condemned. All of them would face the consequences.

"Thomas, look at me!" pleaded Elizabeth.

"Look at your son! Your only child left to you!" As she said that, Elizabeth shoved her son into his father's chest.

"If Anne Boleyn had the opportunity to kill Gregory, she would have done it. She threatened you Thomas. Do you not remember? And do you not think that when she threatened you, she was threatening your family? Without you, we would not have survived." At this thought Elizabeth broke down. The crumpled letter fell from her hands as she cried all the anxiety and pain she had been feeling for so many years.

When her tears were echoing around them, Thomas Cromwell seemed to have awoken. Without knowing it, Thomas hugged his son, and a thought passed through his mind that it had been a long time since he had hugged his son. Way too long.

Still hugging his son with his right arm, Thomas, with his left, pulled his wife to him and at that moment, Thomas knew that although he had done many a wrong to many people, he still had people that loved and cared about him deeply.
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Maggie-AnneB.
Maggie-AnneB.
39. RE: 'The Flight of the Secretary'
Mar 24 2009, 11:09 PM EDT | Post edited: Mar 24 2009, 11:13 PM EDT
That alone was worth living and fighting for. He would always regret Anne Boleyn's death, but that was just something he would have to put behind himself, and Thomas Wyatt. Thomas would never forget the good that Wyatt had done for him. He had saved his life, while risking his own. One day he would repay Wyatt, and one day he would be able to live a life that was good and wholesome, a life Wyatt would have wanted him to have.

Minutes went by, before Elizabeth wiped her tears away and looked up into her husband's eyes.

Thomas took a deep breath before asking Elizabeth, "Where to?"

"You'll see", was all she said.
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